Well, today I can report that they’ve been published. An extremely skilled editor has carefully reduced my text by 50% and has come up with something clean, crisp and compelling. It’s certainly better than my original version – and it targets a more professional audience, too.
For those who are keen to know just what was cut, here is what happened:
"The document may be 108 pages long, but it is quite easy to read.
It’s refreshing to learn how to anonymise data effectively, thus ensuring that it falls outside the ICO’s remit. No breach reporting requirements, here!
But this document is far more than
I like it. So I do hope I get asked to comment again, in this manner. My views always seem better when given a decent pruning.